You requested critique and I see, this time I really could give that to you somehow. Before you´ll drow in "epic", "cute!" and "awesome"!´s, I´ll tell you what I just love about this fanart and this is for sure the pictures composition and the mass of charakters on it, what I know is very hard to draw. The relation of background, foreground and charakters is splendid, your always recognisable artstyle fits the Kirby-charakters in an awesome cartoonish way. But, and with this to my critique, there is something I miss a lot in this pic and it depends in main the the colouring. A cold and dark night = perfektly shown. But where is the lively expression here? There are highlight.. are they even highlights? I really miss them, used as life in the charakters eyes, on the metal parts the charakters have, on the candle! In the darkest winternight a light like a fire should point out more, even if it´s that small. I guess you know what I want to say and I know that you can do it a lot lot lot better and wonder, if you got a little lazy heading the finnishing of that pic.
This very drawing is so imaginative! If I can ask you, who is the young girl with the green dress and bonnet? Who is the knight above the girl with a cross on his helmet? Is that creature with a red ribbon, Chilly the snowman?
I'm not really a big Kirby fan, but I love Dedede's expression! It shows that he has a soft side! Overall, 5 out of 5 Keep up the good work!
The girl in the green dress is Adoline (or ado as she's called in some games). The other knight dude it Galatic knight. And I guess the "snowman" is Marx standing on a ball that you're referring to?.
But, and with this to my critique, there is something I miss a lot in this pic and it depends in main the the colouring. A cold and dark night = perfektly shown. But where is the lively expression here? There are highlight.. are they even highlights? I really miss them, used as life in the charakters eyes, on the metal parts the charakters have, on the candle! In the darkest winternight a light like a fire should point out more, even if it´s that small. I guess you know what I want to say and I know that you can do it a lot lot lot better and wonder, if you got a little lazy heading the finnishing of that pic.
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